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Stop Tweaking Headlines. Start Naming Enemies.
The best copy doesn’t sell — it rallies
Let me guess.
You’re split-testing yet another headline variation.
Or tweaking button colors.
Or rewriting copy for the sixth time this week.
Here’s a wake up call:
Your ads aren’t underperforming because they lack polish.
They’re underperforming because they lack a villain.
Positioning 101: No Hero Wins Without a Fight.
People don’t buy features. They don’t even buy benefits.
They buy a story where they get to be the hero.
And every great story needs an obstacle. A threat. A common enemy.
And you need to show up as the guide who helps them defeat it.
So, who’s your villain?
It doesn’t have to be a competitor. Not always.
Here are some examples:
The myth of “scale at all costs”
Lazy agencies with dashboard addiction
The algorithm-worship cult
Spray-and-pray marketers
Wasted spend your CFO doesn’t see
Frame it. Name it.
Then position your brand as the antidote.
Because when you go to market with a cause — not just a product — you’re not advertising…
You’re rallying a movement.
Want help naming your villain and building your anti-position?
Make sure to stay tuned for tomorrow’s edition.
Best,
Peter Delle
P.S. Want 1-on-1 help crafting a villain your audience can’t wait to destroy? Let’s map it out together — book your free strategy call.